Will you pleease post your stories on Archive of our Own Please?

If RoyxWinry without angst is possible, this story is all the proof you need. Short and sweet, tells a tale and doesn't stick around long enough to get bogged down in unnecessary detail. Brilliant.

I really enjoyed this!

oh, I like it very much. I have to admit that I really enjoy this pairing, but never thought it could really be made plausible...but you made it work.

Ah! Typos!

Just kidding (about freaking out, not the typos). Mayumi-chan, this is a good story. It is so... minimalist. I understand everything without feeling overloaded.

You are a very. good. writer.

::scampers off to read more::

"A/N: I don't know how I feel about this story. I mean, a RoyxWinry w/o angst? Is that even possible?"

apparently so

I love this pairing! You did a really good job and it's convincing, even though there's no angst.

I like how everything was easy to read and their relationship was casual but believable. Awesome job ;)

- decce

This is very cute...I love it...More Roy and Winry please? Please? Please? Thank you!

I like it actually. Its not that they have feelings for each other suddenly, its over time and its exactly how I could imagine it, just with a little more details.

That was very good! I have always loved this pairing but I can never write it. You are talented, so keep up the good work! I shall fave and c2 this!

-Chibeh-

I liked it.

I guess this is review day for Miss Camudekyu.

The things I like: the simplicity of the dialogue, the kind of thoughtless banter leading up to easy conversation. I can actually see the two of them bonding as sort of a catharsis of tension and trauma.

Things I'm questioning: Winry as a coffee girl? What happened to the automail asskicker? I suppose if something was needed to bring the two of them together, coffee is as good as anything. And you're right... a realistic Roy Winry scenario would sort of necessitate some angst at an exponential level.

But I enjoyed it. And I was sort of playing through the possible implications contrasting this piece with "The Alchemologist." I like to imagine that Ed would hemmorage if he knew that the two of them shared a moment. Or a series of moments. Nekkid moments. :)

I feel oddly light-hearted after reading this. Your story is simple and short - yet it's just nice in its own way. I love it! 3

I actually quite liked this, which is a tad odd as I've never really considered this pairing before (though I can see where the angst would step in).

I like the way you wrote this, the shortness works much better than the blow-by-blow descriptions of emotions that we tend to get in fluff and romance fanfics. It lets the reader decide the emotions themselves, in a way. We can see that Winry is a little confused about her feelings for Roy, but you can show that without having her wangst on and on about if she likes him or not.

Bonus points to you!

I love the simple fact that you wrote a winryxroy

it lack's emotion, and it has way to many

fine details in of it this way, your winry

what manner of a slow prosses would you take when

a cute guy ask you out?

Why not take it slow,not just by writting,

he came to the coffee shop one day,and in between that

you put to little detail of what there filling,to the reader love is a fast prosses becaues to them thay only think of whats gonna happen next?

Show the reader a slow passionate love,that in that very second the reader has now become the charator.

remember take it slow,a kind word of evies,from a friend.