Aw! Kaylee and Serenity. Love at first sight.

that was just perfect,

aww, litle baby girl all grown up..

hehe,

good stuff

Very nicely done... :D

I'm poking through your back catalogue now. You write Firefly as well as Ent - how nice for me! I've only just seen this episode. Nicely done, how you linked all this together. I also feel you captured Kaylee very well.

Wicked

I like this. At first I was unsure, but by the end, I really liked this. Good characterization of Kaylee.

Really like how you captured Kaylee here and her back story is cute and sassy. Leads really well on to how we see her in her first encounter with the Captain.

Kudos!

Aw.

That was very well done. It was a joy to read.

Very well written character exposition. I loved it.