Interesting chapter; I have to say that this didn't end the way I'd expected it to; which is probably a good thing.

Yay. Cool ending. And Spike... (there was an ongoing debate with my friends if Spike or Angel were yummier... Spike won.)

As to the trouble radar... I can't say anything about that, but there is some kind of writer's radar, too. (Take a nearly full train, for example. You bet the only other writer in it will sit in my compartment.)

Ah, a happy/sad ending and a horrible/wonderful couple. Love it. :)

Wow you updated quickly. Nice ending, I can't wait to see the next story.

PS. Doza, not everyone has hours of time on hand to read your fic instantaneously. I'm not sure if I left a review, but I liked your s too, but to keep asking people to read it here is getting annoying.

well... ok.. good chapter.. not much happening.. but i think niomi and logan may be on the road to recovery.. or is it? i mean.. now it seems as though faith and logan may be hitting it off. i still kinda miss niomi and logan the way they were at the beginnig. anyways. take care and hey.. you haven't checked out the last chapter of Guardians at the Gates of Hell. don't forgot to drop by and have a read through it. and don't forget to leave a review.

tata.. until the next story.

Good chapter. That wasn't how I was expecting the chapter to end, though.

Whew... what a finale. For some stupid reason I like that you killed Bob... maybe because I expected he'd get away with it.

I'm guessing Brendan and Naomi stayed behind because they weren't very useful? Anyway, I'm amazed at your ability to write so many battle scenes without becoming mechanical about it.

no.. bob's dead? No.

oh well.. it had to happen sometime. anyways.. great chapter.. loved the fighting scene. i can't wait for the next chapter.. or story. take care and please keep up the good work.

and hey... i just updated Guardians at the Gates of Hell. don't forget to check it out. tata.

Hey Notmanos, just to get your count up, great story, eagerly awaiting next chapter. :)

Ya know, the fact that Logan even got a single shot shows just how dangerous he is. . . . If Bob were anyone else, he'd probably be carved like a thanksgiving turkey. But, anyways, good chapter. This fight's gonna be interesting, methinks.

how come helga isnt in this? good chapter though!

Bad Bob. Open relationship or not, you don't do that to a friend without at least talking it over first. But I find him most interesting as an asshole, so I can't say I'm disappointed.

woho... logan's ack in the mix.. i'm not surprised by his reaction to bob sleeping with naomi. i was a little surprised that he actually got one shot in. hehheh. anyways... can't wait for the fight scene to take place. wooho. update soonish... i personally can't wait for the next chapter. take care man and keep up the great work.

Oh sure, Doza, guilt me into showing up. Thanks! :D

Speaking of which, Doza, I think you might be confused - the girl (I assume you mean Leonie, from The Falling Sky) was a Static (Sloane)/ Wolverine hybrid. The Organization really never had Naomi; they wanted her, but couldn't quite get her. I assume her powers were troublesome, and her sister, being highly placed, may have actually not wanted it to happen for some time. (The only decent thing Lethe ever did.)

You know, I think I may have to eventually create an annotated index explaining who first showed up where and why, what plot actually started in what story, and where it (supposedly) ended - supposedly because you never know with me - and it might actually be helpful to me too. I can't tell you how often I have to go through my own stories trying to find where I did something or brought someone in. It's nuts at this rate; it's a saga.

But thanks everybody for reading. I have no idea how long I will be able to keep this going, but I'm always pleased to know people read and (mostly) enjoy.