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xxxSparrow chapter 1 . 8/23/2009 Haunting and elegant. I love the literary elements that make your story concrete, and yet it still feels raw and real. Perfect title. You've made me fall in love with Miroku x Sango again. This was the most perfect piece I could've ever stumbled upon in my current pursuit to relocate my favorite Inuyasha stories from 5 years past. How on Earth could I have missed it then? I wish you'd write again. Loved every word ) |
Brazen Device chapter 1 . 6/30/2008 This felt urban and raw and sharply bittersweet. Modern Sango-yet-not-Sango was a treat to read, and her alternating melancholy and quiet strength reminds one of the canon. Wonderful job. |
sanomegumi4ever chapter 1 . 3/24/2008 this is one of my favourite one-shots! your story has a kind of supernatural and sad and happy feeling to it at the same time...the first time i read this story(i forgot to review then), i couldn't get it outta my mind...so i'm reviewing it now...i wish something like this happened to me! YOU ROCK! |
srdfgchvjboguvjh chapter 1 . 12/31/2007 very intriguing beginning. i love the bit about the kimono. i liked the story a lot. i would have loved it if you could have explored the boring monotony of her life a bit more before introducing miroku/mikio/whateveryouwanttocallhim. |
Edward Houshi chapter 1 . 10/14/2007 This is one of my favorite stories. It's absolutely incredible. |
Nagasasu chapter 1 . 6/10/2007 Wonderful one-shot. Definitely a favorite of mine! |
semi-charmed kinda life chapter 1 . 5/30/2007 This was such a beautiful story, it had kind of a haunting feel to it and I know it is one that will stay in my mind. Great job! |
xwexarexpilotsx chapter 1 . 9/5/2006 You're so good at writing that it almost scares me...and then I smile, because I know the most deserving people get these talents. Please keep writing. You capture the essense of the story and the characters perfectly. I've read this story about ten times over, and I've finally decided to review it. I couldn't think of anything possible to say that would capture how I was feeling. At what was said above still isn't. But it's the best I can do. I'm usually rendered speechless after reading this, so this is a step up. :) Thanks for the story. Puts a smile on my face every time. |
Silindro chapter 1 . 6/25/2006 That was gorgeous. Favs list for sure. |
dementedchris chapter 1 . 3/12/2006 How can happily-ever-after break my heart? Like this. I've gone through an awful lot of AU Miroku-Sango fics to find one that can clutch my heart with the right amount of passion and longing. |
Kishusbabe chapter 1 . 1/14/2006 fantastic i was getting a little confused about the charactors but it was good |
Almandine-Azaleea chapter 1 . 1/7/2006 Wow! That was really well written. I love the inter-weaving! _ |
Aperture Lurker chapter 1 . 1/2/2006 That was beautiful. Simply beautiful. Almost made me cry, too. |
mylovemiroku chapter 1 . 12/28/2005 I absolutely loved it. Very well worded and it flowed very nicely. At first I was a bit perplexed but it ended up unfolding just the way it should have. Please continue writing stories. |
YamiPaladinofChaos chapter 1 . 11/13/2005 A very, at once dark and very sweet romance, but not WAFF. Definitely a good change of pace from the usual (not necessarily bad) fluff that abounds. |