Do you realize that your stories would be just as plausible if you left the violence out of them? Something is off.

This almost made me cry

what a amazing story! bobby has com a long way, since he was attack.. talking to the victim, will help him heal & recover...

feel for bobby's pain , as he tried to recall what happen to him... love that olivia & gang from svu, are on the case!

love the plot!

"Bobby, honey, I know you're hurting. I know you're confused, and I know you're angry. But so help me God, if I hear the word cripple pass your lips again, I will slap you all the way into next week. You got that?"

Yes! That's it. Jo wins all the awards. All of them!

I mean, don't get me wrong. I'm fine with Bobby angst and I'm enjoying it. I just get a kick out of Jo not handling him with kid gloves when the situation calls for it.

I also am now mildly curious as to what in freaking hell occured between Bobby and Huang? I feel like that would have been a battle royale worthy of watching/reading.

Oh, her...

Okay, that's it. Jo is officially on my awesome character list. I can forgive the slip-up with Trivial Pursuits; but it takes a closet genius to out-logic Bobby.

And aww! Way to go Mike! So, he's talked with Huang, huh? Interesting.

Him and Alex? I have to think about that a bit...

So, um, if she does all three at the same time, what happens? *snicker*

Hmm. I think I'm gonna like Jo. I also get the feeling she's not going to heed Deakins' advice.

And awww! Way to go, Alex! Let him get it all out of his system.

*facepalm* Eliot...That is not the way to start a conversation... with anyone! Much less a guy stressing out in a hospital bed after hell visited him on earth! You need to rethink your approach, bud.

However, dang. Now I sort of wish there was a recording of all those readings. That's the only way I think I'd ever be able to get through that book...Oh well. At least I get to keep the associated warm fuzzies until you rip them away again.

Oh, almost forgot. I think I'm gonna like Mr. Eames.

Oh, Alex.

Well, at least it's good she's getting it out of her system. Goodness knows it's gonna get tougher ahead...one the physical healing is underway.

On the plus side, I like drugged up Logan. Can we have more drugged up Logan? Because he's sort of hillarious. "I'm a lot worse than...I am...I mean." *snort* Priceless.

Also, great chapter for Deakins too. Papa Bear is gonna have his hands full with these three, isn't he? At least he's up for the challenge though!

Huzzah for Fin and Olivia!

Ding Dong one the...er, I'm not sure how to phrase that, but he's dead at least. And, thank goodness for respitory arrest! (never excepted to ever write that...) Cause, I don't think I, much less Bobby, could have handled it if he'd been awake when Cozza came in. That...that might have sent him over the deep end and led to rant fueled rage-review. So, uh, woot.

Logan! *facepalm* You enjoy beating characters up in fics, don't you? *eyes author suspiciously* Well, if there's one way to get into Alex's good graces; nearly dying to save her partner is definitely up there.

*groans* Damnit. I should have known it couldn't last. And I was beginning to really like Danny! Argh! But, on the plus side, at least there will be no talk of taking Bobby to Washington.

Oh, Logan. The master of understatement. *facepalm*

Alex, breathe. Keep breathing and, I don't know, try not to shoot anyone.

Argh! I'm really, really starting to hate the FBI guys right now.

Seriously? Seriously? Can you not give the man a break? *throws hands in the air* I give up.

But...awwww! Maggie! Oh, good to see her again! Carver was right about one thing, she's definitely a tough little girl. I actually just rewatched that episode so...yeah. So many feels with that little exchange.

Now if we can work on the not killing Bobby before we get to the end of the story that would be much appreciated.

*sigh* You were doing so well...

Okay, I can't be too upset. I mean, getting to "see" Cragen punch an a-hole FBI agent has to be in one of my top favorite L&O; fanfic moments ever! Even better since he actually beat Elliot at it. :D

Also, I love the elevator scene. Like I said before, I like Danny and it's good to see him taking Alex's welfare into consideration also. Poor Mike though. lol.

He's good people, though. Mike, I mean.

Now, if we can just manage getting Bobby back on the healing track...

Oh, Bobby...

I...have no... idea what to say

Except, maybe, the weird part is, as bad as the statement with Eliot was, Bobby's mom asking if it was time to go was absolutely the most devastating section of the entire story (so far). Just to see that sudden switch and know simultaneously what he'd gained by her visit and what he was going to lose...it was rough.