Has Goku been educated in his life

OMFG HAHAHAAHAHA THIS IS THE BEST. I read this in one sitting out in damn public on the subway with no choice but to hold in my reactions throughout-NOPE, DIDN'T HAPPEN, I bust out giggling like a madwoman, trying to bite down and get the figurative nosebleeds under control - AGAIN, NOPE, I WAS GRINNING LIKE AN IDIOT. From the very fluid details of Goku's inner guttermind to the nosy briefs duo and payback, it's safe to say this fic was written so well, and the Lemon with a capital L, wooooooooah mama, that you can DEFINITELY WRITE! His dirty talk tho (OH MY GOD) and the way he treated his queen to the point of turning SSJ had my eyes poppin' out! And the ending! The audacity! I pretty much died, thank you for that! Anyhoo, I'm years late but I'm so glad you finished this. It was a fun ride XD

Wow the ending was amazing. Excellent story!

this fic was awesome, that's all I can say :) So steamy

I died at this last part XDD LMAO

Hahaahahah outwitted by GOKU of all people!

5 pages

... GODDAMN GOKU

I really liked that. I reeeeaaallly liked that. Your creativity is awesome! That ending made me squeal out, and I do not yell at stories, but this one stifled a reaction from me. " that's tge best thing ever!" I yelled randomly in my empty apartment when I saw what Goku enacted as his revenge. That was like the best just desserts ever! XD Mmm dessert. Well you've done it, now I'm hungry and in the mood to write. I've got a profile, I guess I'll get to writing. Thank you for that extra push, now I know I wanna get down and write out my own stories ;D you did great!

If you make another chapter try making it where Gohan/videl or master Roshi finds the diary and reads it, I can already see it, with Gohan and videl they would probly scream bloody murder/Gohan would try to tear his eyes out and with the perverted master he would read it and be proud that his pupil could not only be the strongest but also just as Pervy as himself, even if it's just in a book lol

Damn that ending! Poor Vegeta and Bulma may never have sex again after what they heard Kararot and the harpy do thru the phone!

Fantastic! You write hooooootttt lemons! Amazing, I wish you had tons of them here!

I've enjoyed this story so far! To me, the characters occasionally seem a bit OOC, but hey, it's DBZ, it's basically impossible to get them to seem in-character for every reader, let alone in situations like this. I know it's been ages since you posted this story, but if you ever decide to come back to it, it could really use some editing and refining. If you wanted, I'd love to help in that endeavor, should you decide to start it. :)

Thanks for all your hard work!
M.C.

OMG, I loved the ending so much xD

hahha nice story..
lmao hahha
really..
just imagined the expression of bulma and vegeta in the end of chapters, well really funny i admit it..
oh my god..
hahha
i can't stop laugh..
well, I like your story.. really like it..

wow nice story! love how Goku was able to express his feelings that way Lol interesting and unique story!