This was very well done!

Very nice. I could easily see Palom and Porom interacting just like that. Good job.

That was cute! I loved the relationship between Palom and Porom in the game. It was that sort of sibling rivalry kind of thing, but at the smae time you could tell that they really did care about each other, as brother and sister. I think that the idea given here was very realistic. It makes perfect sence! Very good!

One of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Definately one of the best Palom and Porom ones. I would also like you to know that I think you could make a great continuem on this fan fiction. All my support, Elizabeth aka Racheal.

What a great story. Short, in-character, and about two underutilized people from one of my favorite games. It's nice to see little character pieces like this still being written. Thanks for a great read.

Oh I liked this! Excellent work, very touching. ;)

That's really sweet. Is there going to be some more, because this would make a great subject for a long story. I really like!

Wonderful. Nice work.