What , that's it?NO!

Make an omake or something T.T Its so good XO

Okay, I am not bashing your fic! I do not believe in flames, because they are rude, and we are all mature readers and writers on this website, I hope.

The movie is bull. Anything you got off that is not holding true to the manga that Nobuhiro Watsuki wrote, nor the anime that was based off of the manga. There is no 'Flying Sky Dragon Flash' in Hiten Mitsurugi-ryu. The move that they oh so pathetically tried to copy is the Ryutsuisen, the Dragon-hammer strike. Same type deal, only w/o the stupid twirlings. And the move that you mentioned is definately not the only move in Kenshin's repertoire.

If you are talking about OVAs in terms of Reflections, Trust and Betrayal, those do follow the same plot as Nobuhiro's work. Don't have any of the moves of Hiten Mitsurugi-ryu specified out loud but the story is for the most part identical, and I love the art work.

Kaoru is a horrible cook, which is why Kenshin usually does the kitchen duties. Sometimes Megumi (the doctor) cooks, but mostly it's Kenshin.

Like I said earlier, I am not bashing your story. In its own right, it is a good story, with a very interesting plot-line. I guess I'm trying to say that MOVIE BAD! DON'T LISTEN TO ITS LIES!

Apologizing in advance for any hurt feelings, I end this review with full support of your story (even though it is completed). May your future ventures be successful!

Aww poor Sano T_T Cool story...bye.

well written! me liked! ^_^. muah! BUT, i want to point out some things. please please dont take it as a flame! i dont review a story unless i like it. anyway:

1)Kenshin would never do that to Kaoru.

2)If it were my story, I wouldn't have let Mariko die.

but it IS ur story and it was really good! i really hope u didnt feel too bad about the two points i made! ^_^'

Ano. Oops. Until seconds after I sent my last review did I realize you had already finished the story! Hahaha! (feels like an idiot.)Feh. Whatever. The end was sad...Mariko broke poor Sanosuke's heart...I was shocked! Oro! But anyways cool story. Ja ne!

Ah, you updated...I was wondering. ^_^ Good chapter, and as in reply to its shortness...don't feel bad. I mean, I write these monster chapters in my stories, I'm almost afraid they'll grow fangs. ^.^ So don't feel bad! And... I'm not an expert in this category (I'm only thirteen, so...), but isn't it bad to have an intercourse when the woman is pregnant? Does that mean Sano's baby is in danger? OH NO! (slaps forehead.) I hope not...but it's your story, you do what ya want. Please update soon! Arigatou gozaimasu!

KENSHIN KISSED HER? NO! (Beats Sir Ken over the head with a zanbatou) Grr... Though Mariko is an interesting character, I'd like to see more of her personality revealed. She's like Tomoe, but...I dunno. Great story, please continue soon, de gozaru yo!

If Kenshin still cannot forget about Tomoe, why don’t he just rot with her and leave Kaoru with someone else because Kaoru deserve someone that truly love her. I’m sick of that Himura Kenshin!

good