Great story!

Wow. Your fic...it's so emotional and deep! I love it.

And I so know what you mean about T5 being uberhard even on easy! I've beaten the game with a bunch of characters, but its so hard! Example, my Shihan (now Expert) Hwoarang couldn't beat Warlord Lee! And I can beat just about anyone! And I hate Jinpachi too XD

Ok, back to the fic. I loved it. That's all I can really say.

Well, its actually "Fear the wrath of God" but I dont really giv that much. When I played Xiao's story, I was so mad that Xiao didn't have a cut scene with Devil Jin! If she gets one with Jin, she should have one with Devil Jin! After all, he is the same person except...changed a little. Well, that was an awesome as one shot, even tho Jin did just leave Xiao there but still, that was really good!

*Sniff*

Aw...that was way to sweet.

And sad.

And it made me upset.

It also wants me to make a Devil Jin story. Yes, it does. But I have to finish the fanfic I already haver.

Err...anyways, I wish it wasn't a one-shot. Yet, everytime I read a one-shot, I get all emotional.

Damn you authors. Hmph.

wow! dat was amazin!

Poor Xiao..and Jin! i hope u'll get da chapter up soon...i.e...durin dis week!

Hey this was pretty nice. What Jin says is "Fear the Wrath of God" in Tekken 5 but I understand what you mean about it being hard even on easy! With the story, I believe its moving along at a snappy pace and the writing itself is well done too. Keep at it!