 Dragon Jadefire 12/8/05 . chapter 2You should make this drabble into a story, remove it from this and make it a story, you have a great plot! |
 Dragon Jadefire 12/8/05 . chapter 1Bit of advice, Pirate's honor...I don't think that can be trusted much! Dragon's honor...that's a different story. Great chapter/drabble! |
 CelloSolo2007 12/8/05 . chapter 2this is a really cool plot line. please update soon ^_^
peaches! |
 GirlPower 12/7/05 . chapter 2 wow that was cool. i loved mekai. he kicks ass. keep going.ta |
 SweetStories11 12/7/05 . chapter 2WOW! GREAT! Awesome! L-O-V-E-D IT! It was nice to read something that had minimal zutara in it, but was still interesting to read! and funny too! I chuckled along with Zuko at that one part! ^o^ Keep it up!
OH! AND congrats to Katara! Go Fire Queen! lol
-Monika- |
 counting by midnights 12/7/05 . chapter 2Admiral Mekai’s voice rose in anger. "I'm trying to see things from your point of view General, but I can't get my head that far up my ass."
haha! i loved that line *wipes away tear*
and wen u said "kat", the first thing that popped into my head was "me? the heck?...wait...oh..." cuz my name begins with kat, but thats not the point.
and i completely agree with the plan to survive! |
 4ESDragon 12/7/05 . chapter 2hahahahahahahha! I loved Mekai's comments!
Zuko should diffinatly keep him!
You seem to have fun writing Zutaras...and frankly I am not one to complain...does Baal hate it when you write romantic stories? |
 Rashaka 12/7/05 . chapter 2More. Definitely worth reading more. |
 AirGirl13 12/6/05 . chapter 1 That was pretty good, especially considering that you write mostly humor, the last time I checked.
You should do humor, angst (especially Aangst), and randomness! I love angsty drabbles and one shots! They are so awesome. |
 SweetStories11 12/6/05 . chapter 1*cheers* beautifully done! everything was great, even though it wasn't too long! Loved the idea behind it too! Really great! You need to do some more soon! and it doesn't matter to me what kind, whatever comes to your mind is fine by me! lol ^o^
-Monika- |
 4ESDragon 12/6/05 . chapter 1Aw! Funny, random, but most of all CUTE!
Don't tell Baal, but your the better writer.
Inner child: Tell him! Than she can get the crap pounded out of her!
Me: SHUT UP! (Throws inner child into closet)
Inner child: What about your anti-child abuse classes
Me: Screw it. |
 GirlPower 12/6/05 . chapter 1 Yay for zutara. nice emotions guess the two names were aang and zuko rite? i vote for aangst zuko's too angsty to be anything else |
 counting by midnights 12/6/05 . chapter 1randomness works :D |
 Plumm 12/6/05 . chapter 1Awesome, I request randomness, Mwahaha! |
 crzysheelf 12/6/05 . chapter 1love and angst! heck yes! but i still am a fan of fluff! i loved it, and the whole flower thing, totally would have never thought of that! keep up the drabble, as long as it is zutara, i love it! |