Ehh... I prefer the name Squirrelflight. (the name she gets in the books)

Good but more more more

I am not worthy i know I'm not your story is great so hear me out...when the clans are at their destination they met a mysterious black cat with the markings of their clans this cat is called Courage and he shows one of each clan their suited territory soon Courage joins one of the clan his warrior name changed to Courageheart in his first battle he is terrified by the setting sun at first no one paid notice untill the sun began to sink into his pelt until it became fire in agony Courageheart becomes a lion and towers over the enemy's he roars a threat and rushes into the fight with his clanmates though does not kill in the end Courageheart turns back but runs into the leader of the enemy clan the leader called him the cursed one Courageheart takes this for granted and leaves the clan...untill the final book comes he returns in more power but does not use it instead he fights fairly and helps the clan in their darkest hour but once his old leader died he named him his successor ...once again I am sorry but I hope you do this its just my friend and I made this cat and my friend then well went into the clouds

Once again sorry but one more thing

My real name is Courage :)

I like it but there's one thing, if it is after the darkest hour then some cats wouldn't be there or wouldn't have died

Why did firestar have to die :( can u read my stories plz?

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COOL! K well you get a movin! these awesome stories dont write themselves!

how could you...Fire star... DEAD? NO

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make sandstorm die to. if she is not already dead. mabey you could do a story about firestar in star clan! Great so far . I never realy liked the idea of graystripe being leader of thunder clan. mabey in like 2 chapters he could die from old age, or nerves! mabey squirelltail (not sure what her warrior name is) could be his dupety! then if he dies she could be leader! then firestars kin would rule thunder clan once more! or cloudtial graystary duptey and once graystripe dies cloutail would be leader and have squirelltail for a dupety!

Good chapter. I quite like Squirrelfur more than Squirreltail, too... Keep it up!

I just got Dawn today and finished it (gasp, what a great book!) and um, I just wanted to let you know that um, well if you haven't finished it yet or want to know anyway, I have some info concerning this from your story: "But instead, Firestar had been forced to leave her, Brightheart, and Cloudtail behind." Not to spoil anything, but you might have to change that part if you want to, you'll know what I mean when you get to a certain part in the book. Or just don't change it if you don't want to. Either way, I will still read the story (getting better and better by the way) Update soon!

Ah! What in the-? Sandstorm? NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, I don't think so! That makes the pain of Firestar's passing even worse...the poor kits don't have a daddy! *cries* No, make it stop, make it stop, make it stop! Anyway, lovely prophecy...I like. Update!

Wonderful once again! I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and I hope you're going to get Dawn soon. ~. Give you some more ideas for your stories. D

Keep it up!

~Stormeh of Cherreh and Stormeh

Graystar! Graystar! Graystar! *cheers*

What's this? Silverstream knows there's another cat in Graystripe's future? Now, then, who could it be? Anyway, great chapter, loved the ceremony! Please update!