wonderful

I love the way you portray Raidou XD him with his "gender blindness" is amazing!

That was a great third date lmao I'd be having the time of my life romping around with the children in the lake haha

Ha, this is cute and funny. I normally only go for longer stories, but this is great. It makes me wish for more though.

Aww! i was looking for some Kakairu, but ifs its there then the only hint is kakashi showing up half dead on irukas doorstep.

But I liked this one shot anyway, made me smile and laugh a bit. I like your writing.

very nice id like to see more of these

Koda: ... I think you half-killed my big sister with this... But that's a good thing after the cruddy day she had. I picked up her iPad just to tell whoever you are thank you for making my sissy's day. Now I need to run before my sis sees me with stuff and kills me!

BRILLIANT! :D

"honey massage" hahaha loved it! (the story I mean, not just the honey related fantasies you just planted in my head..._)

You write in a way that's so damn easy to read. I love it, it makes a fluffy change from the deep dark angst I usually find myself lost in. And, of course, it's good to find someone who actually knows how to write.

please please update when you get a chance final a chance for the lil kids to get revenge on the oldeer ninjas

Very nice!

Ha! Loved the Raidou abuse, loved the sly 'n snarky Iruka, loved the random androgynous kids and I especially loved the 'crazy snowy winter countries' tangent (yay me for living in a sub-tropical area my whole life). Loved it all!

I like

I like it!

Kisses from Argentina!