Game over
Now it was war.
Powerful.
Thanks

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review: September/ October 2016:

This was an interesting character study. There were one or two places where some more clarification might have been helpful, for example, Dean's sense of loss when Sam used a tactic reminiscent of John- why would this cause a sense of loss when John is still alive (was this nostalgia for a child growing up perhaps?) There were some missed words/ punctuation problems, but not so many as to jar the reader from the story- as a small point, the use of dividers when the action moves on to a new location would have made this easier to read. That said, I did enjoy this story on the whole & I thought Dean's characterisation was spot on.

Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards Review (October 2016):

A beautiful story here. Your characterization of Dean, Sam and John felt quite true to character. Sam as the 10-year-old facing the hard facts of hunting, Dean trying to shield his brother and John pushing Sam out into the world of the Winchesters for his own good...Dean's conflict was clear here and you used the motif of the superhero/game very well. I thought that Dean using the sidekick lines - keeping it a game for Sam even as the game was ending for him - was ironic and tragic. This foreshadows the end of Sam's childhood, but it's the end of Dean's as well.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review - September/October 2016

This story had some good potential, and the idea it tried to impart of hunting being a game to Dean, until it became all too real when Sam got hurt, was clear. The problem I had with it though, was that there was no separation between scenes, to show that time had passed. There were also a few words that had a different meaning than the word that was used, but sounded the same as the word that was meant. A beta reader might have caught those instances. This would have helped the story flow more evenly, and I would have had an easier time concentrating on the storyline. Sam also has always had chestnut or dark brown hair, not dark blonde, and his eyes are hazel. Those little facts might not seem like much, but to many fans of the show, they are obvious enough to pull a person out of the story. It's a good story about Dean growing up, and these few things being fixed first could have made it even better.

A very succinct look at a lesson that had to come, but was oh, so painful when it arrived. Thank you for writing!

Another great story! Top flight for content, you could use a copy proofer/beta sometimes. If I still was active on FF I would offer - I've actually done that for pay before, but I haven't even checked my email for months!

Wow very cool :)

just wanted to say, love your stuff. was wondering if you knew of a story where Caleb and Dean meet for the first time, i've looked around but haven't found it yet, don't even know if there is one

Extremely well written - perfect characterisations, especially of John.

Poor Dean.

I know I have reviewed all of your stories but its letting me so maybe i didnt...who knows... you know I can totally see this happening just as you wrote it...john is doing the best he can but geez they are just kids... anyway... great job and wonderful job showing once again how quick dean had to grow up! ttyl ~ m

I don't know how I missed this story earlier, but it's great. You do such a great job with Dean's angst.

I can't even express he desire I get so salt and burn John after reading this!

GREAT WORH - as always!

This story had me so entralled that now I'm going to be late. But it's so worth it! I absolutely adore your style of writing. *adds to fav authors* There is so much insight in every single one of your stories that the reader can tell you put 110% in everything you write.

wow.. this was absolutely stunning. great characterization of Dean and Sam... will definitely be looking for new stories from you in the future!

Oh, that's so harsh for Dean.

I love these sort of stories.