Wow. This was really sweet. I really like the idea of this couple being together the way you described it. I wasn't sure how a Maes x Riza couple would work at first but made it work very well. Good job!

Really well written. Reminds me of Hemmingway a bit, how you managed to say a lot wothout haveing to use lots of words. Excellent job of exploring a relationship in a new way! My hat's off to you!

Very Good. Handled tastefully, but directly. Very interesting view on relationship. I would highly recomend this.

So sad. So very well detailed and emotional. Good job.

oh,... poor riza... guess shes gonna have to get roy to admit he loves her so she won't feel lonely anymore...

Riza and Maes that's rare. I like it.

Wow...I have a new pairing to research now...very well written

*whipes away tear* I loved it.