bitter-sweet story :)

nicely written

the last line is sad...

aw sad. But really great, everything was spot on. I especially liked your Buffy.

i must say how refresshing it is to read a story and actually be able to read it and not have to fight horrible grammer, misspacing, terrible word choices, and all the other pit falls tons of writers tend to graviate towards on here...yes, very refreshing to read your work! *sigh* anywho, i like the way you describe emotion, physical and internal. i can visualize your writing which is a big plus as well. this story is not only good but flows very well to have it be easily believable as "accurate" which is also another plus. it's good, sad, emotional, and a nice lil story. well done :)

Well I'm definitely crushed. In a good way though. I definitely felt Willow's emotions. Will this be continued?

I'll let you know im not a Buffy/Willow fan, but that works very well, fits and is vair in character, liking it _

That was simply beautiful. I loved yet hated that last part; it just about broke my heart. You completely understand Buffy and Willow's relationship, and the unrequited love and Buffy's request to "just forget everything" suited both their natures perfectly. You really can capture a mood, and keep Buffy and Willow completely in character. You also have a serious way with words; their dialogue tells the story, instead of the other way around. So many Spillow fics emphasize their latent love for one another, but it really shows your talent as a writer to so artfully express Buffy's obvious objection to late-night occurences, and Willow's sad acceptance of the truth. You are such an eloquent writer, and I hope to read more of your work in the near future. Your little ficlet touched me to the core, and makes me so grateful that there still are those out there who truly appreciate the show and can do Joss justice. Thank you.

That was really good

NO! NO! NO! As much as I enjoy B&F;, I also enjoy W&B;! B should fall for Willow, be more than just a friend!

Argh! So sad for Willow. Makes me long for it to continue on to a Wiffy happy ending. But, even if it doesn't, it's still very good.