Cute. that is all I have to say. *Hissing sound* (Don't worry. Today i've been hissing a lot _)

This was nice to read. Short and sweet, I liked it.

This piece captures the 'emotion' of Sasuke extremely well for something without much direction of describing words. Thumbs up for you, keep on writing! -grin-

If it's poetry, say so, otherwise you might get in trouble with the PTB for not listing your "story" properly.

ok i like it

So is this a n/s story? Out of all of your poems, this would have to be my favorite.