I adore how the author just sweeps rape under the table and actually have the nerve to make said rapist indignant while emotionally abusing the victim as if she still had the moral high ground.

Seriously though, this author is a world class moron.

Great story! I just wish there was more Phoebe/Cole. :)

Come ooooon!

I hate how the girls don't trust Cole at all. Even Phoebe she is all hate. :(

Omg finally they kissed! I hope more there is more Phole in the next chapter! Love your story and the way you write.

A great story
I like it with Prue and Paige and Piper
I love Cole and Phoebe
You write very good.
Please write more storys about them, hope with happy endings

I liked this I Sadie, but the last couple of chapters made me mad; the way the sisters were treating Cole, especially Paige, as if he was evil and doing evil things when he's been good for fives years and the way they hold his past as the source and belthazor against him...it's like they, and you, forgot that the sisters kidnapped, tortured and raped him and he didn't hold it against them...

And the with Grace; because Prue said she was really a Halliwell, they wanted (Paige especially) to take the girl away...even he expected it!

Seriously, I liked the fix, but it just pissed me off how you had them still being against Cole when they did him wrong too

nice

It is great that you finished this story, but I have to say that even if it is "cannon", it is hard to get past the sheer amount of bitchiness in this fic.

Try and read it from cole's point of view: whatever he does the sister still bitch and bitch and... you get my drift. Paige I wasn't a fan when she appeared on the show but here she's like THE mega bitch, she never let him breathe even for a moment. Piper is almost alright here. Phoebe is... confused; like usual. And when she's confused, I guess she tends to bitch... Unfortunately she's confused a lot.

And here comes Prue skimping in and basically telling cole: "you know your daughter? The most and only precious person in your life? Well she's not your daughter, she's a HALLYWELL. So she stays here. No you don't get any say in that because she has the SOUL of Pkoebe unborn daughter. But be happy you get to spend so much time with GOOD witches who would like nothing more than vanquish your ass...

Yeah I'm a bit sarcastic here but come on! double standard much? When possessed by the source, Cole made a few half-hearted attempt to annoy them. When under the spell at the beginning of your fic, they TORTURE and RAPE him, and THEY are the one who hold the grudge while HE has to be all meek and apologetic? WTF!

Rant's over.

I really loved Cole's emotion i this chapter. This should've happened in the show. I loed the way he yelled at Paige, not saying that I hate her or anything, but she really needed that. I love this story. This is a great one.

I'm unsure as to why you're freaking out so much, it was a brilliant, fantastic read and very entertaining and amusing at the right moments. It was awesome, and I love it!

Wow, that was some chapter! I never expected that!

Great idea, I love it!

Hi, sorry it took me a long time to review the next chapter, but I've been having some personal problems.

I just loved chapter 29, it was so good. It seems that Phoebe finally realized that Cole is good. And prue was a great touch. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Awsome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awsome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!