I love this, it's so unique. I really liked the way you described Sesshoumaru's relationship with his parents, although I don't understand why you would mention that Sesshoumaru's blood isn't pure if it's not something you intended to tie up in this fic. Other than that, I really enjoyed it.

undeniably awesome

it is very funny!cool!

yay! it's so cute! sesshy's a furball! STUPID MYOGA!(Jaken too...)[I know who the mongrall is! Sesshy's mom, because she's part poison demon! yay poison demon!]

And so Jaken the Loyal and Irritating became the great Sesshoumaru-sama's chief retainer. I absolutely love this. I guess Myouga's extra abilities are of no use when he takes off at the first sign of danger.

BTW, loved the image of Sess almost overwhelmed by his pelt, and the description of his nosedive to the ground...