Please tell me your writing a sequel!

Cute story! i loved it!:)

This was a great story! You did an amazing job.

This was totally cute! I loved how you sectioned it off with each section being a different time. It helped move the story along. You did an excellent job on the emotions. I really enjoyed how Nick bargained with his mother that was great! Great job!

aww, that was soo cute.. i love it

This is really cute. Are you going ot add another chapter? -pause for dramatic effect- *unpause* hope so:)

*GeorgeEadsLover:)

I really enjoyed your story - you are a very talented writer - keep it up!

i love it and your stories as usual!

I don't know why, but the line,

"Hey," he called softly, pulling her back towards him, “whatever it says, I love you,"

made me want to cry. It was just so perfect. And I love how you used the idea of Sara not knowing she wanted to be pregnant until she realised she wasn't. That was a very nice little touch, and very Sara-esque, I think. :)

I really, really liked this, honey, and I love the title with it. Great job.

Perfection, girlie. Loved it. But why wouldn't I? :) And I like the jump cut things, I thought it flowed well. Thanks for this lovely de-stressor. I really needed it.

Aw, such an adorable story. Very cute snickers fluff!

I'm going to call that she's pregnant. I'm not too sure if that qualifies as angsty but who cares? I love your angsty fluff, Ash. You make my Saturday morning.

Looks like I'm not the only one who thinks she's with child! Oh snap. Muahahaha...*excited*

:O A jewellry box? Ashley you sneaky sneaky girl.

Love that sarcastic line about peeing on a stick. She so would have said that.

I really liked this one, Ash. Thought it was definitely on the mark for the characters and everything. You write awesome angsty fluff. I'm jealous. :D

You rock my CSI socks,

Claire.

AH! I need a sequel! Bravissimo!

Of course I loved this...if I wasn't so tired (even six shots of espresso today didn't help enough) I'd say more. But I'm jealous that my mojo seems to be on vacation.

Absolutely loved this. It's such a different kind of story, I really liked your approach. Fantastic :)