Very nice. I, of course, can never unread their pet names shudder. But the ending was suitably sweet.

beware he who touches the candy

This story made me aww a bit hehe

Haha, great one-shot.

Another good job. I like the contest. Those two would have to make even love into a bit of a struggle.

great story, i enjoyed reading it

Awesome story, nice to see Drakken finally make the first move... or was that Shego? Lol!

Great one-shot, I really enjoyed this one. Not really a fan of D/S, but you made this totally believable.

Great job!

Dave

Wow! I really liked this fic! it's always great to read a good DS fic (ya know, I'm a obsessed DS shipper!) And I really liked how you wrote about them, very in character!

And the valentine's idea is adorable! I can perfectly see drakken being all nervous when asking shego about being his valentine! _ so cute! and the kiss scene was pretty hot! excellent fic! ;)

1º Good Story.

2º You have written it very well, the description done during the kiss from a 3ºperson POV it's well grite, and i never read a kiss write with so much passion. And the way Drakken and Shego react during your fic is very believable. I like your FanFic because have a good story and it's very well written. Well, and be a D/S fan help.

Loved it! And not just because I love all D/S but because your writing style is excellent. I liked how you acknowledged yourself as the narrator to explain the level of shock, very effective. And the story was fabulous, great job at the end by not making it ALL about lust. Super story, awesome work!