Thanks for sharing...loved it!

Awesome story :):):):)!

Where the hell did you get the idea that Inuyasha meant femal dog demon? Someone by the username, 'daijanohei' already explained this, in detail, but I just thought I'd just make the suggestion that you should take some notes from their review fix up your translations.

This was the best sessXinu book ever!

I really loved your story. Yeah the actual storyline was great and you have a nice writing style, but I LOVED the actual yaoi scenes; so freakin' hot! Well done and I would like to read your other work.

I love this story.

I have a prompt for you; originally a prompt for FMA but can work with Inucest/some other character:

"Ed and Al are Lolitas (if you don't understand the term, look up the book and understand that it's now simply used as a term for sexually precocious adolescence or children). Ed and Al are incestuous and very protective of one and other regardless of whether you decide for the actual sex-act of their relationship to manifest during the present-story or pre-story. Roy meets Edward at some point, falls for his charms and his exciting life, then later also meets his brother and becomes whirl-winded into a life of two young lovers who seemingly will always favour each other more than they him. Lust, envy, games and deceit ensue. Much explicitness (sex, violence, language and all around content). Dub-con, non-con, mind games, twin-kink practically, daddy-play turned around into torment daddy, DOM/lesserdom/sub, blood-play? Possible minor character death (perhaps parent killed by child?)

Read or read about Lolita, listen to Lana Del Reys' Lolita and Put Me in a Movie, watch The Dreamers with Micheal Pitt and a Spanish film called Threesome. That should help you write this. However you plan to make these three characters meet is up to you just know that throughout this those two brothers will always choose each other."

I Loved it! usually i dont read stories longer then ten chapters or 50,000 words but this one kept me intertained the whole time. your a great writer, can't wait to read more of your stories. *!* (star struck)

Uh-oh I sense a disaster on the way D;

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Hmm still can't imagine Sesshoumaru as the Submissive one. Oh well good story despite.

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Great story

i love ur storys