Nice I like it

I know you posted this years ago but just wanted to say this was such a delight to read. You took the tv characters and translated them seamlessly to paper or rather Microsoft word or something similar :) I actually prefer this version to the show because it is more realistic. Keep writing!

300th review!Anyway...i loved this story! It was really cute, and worked well, even though you wrote it before S2 was over. You got some of it pretty straight...Pam leaving etc. Keep writting!

Mangotango101

that was so sad! i can't imagine both of them gone from Dunder-Mifflin. And as annoying as Michael can be, sometimes I genuinely feel bad for him. Great writting so far. Can't wait to read the last 6 chapters.

Mangotango101

Ok, I read this whole story today, and I really don't understand how you do it. You totally captured the wonderful tension that was always such a big part of the Jim/Pam storyline, especially back in Season 2. Reading it now just makes me wish the whole show could have gone this direction. You're so good at really pinpointing your characterizations and making everything feel true to the universe, whether that universe is the Office or Community or whatever, and I just want to thank you for giving such great fics to your readers. Phenomenal job!

best. fic. ever.

Aw, that was cute! I was worried this ending wasn't going to be very happy with the way you started the chapter... but I'm glad it turned out the way it did! Nice job!

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

As much as I love the relationship between Jim and Pam, I think I love the one between Jim and Dwight almost as much... and this was just amazing. :) The other chapters have been good, but I think this one kind-of blew me away... nice job! Great "going away" scene! Kind-of how I picture it, too... Only I just hope it doesn't happen anytime soon!

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

Wow, what an amazing story. I got this off a friend's favorites list and it was so fun to read, especially since you were writing it during the latter half of season 2! I loved your use of language; the way you described things was so poetic and yet so accessible, sometimes I was simply in awe of how you could turn a phrase. And unlike most stories this long where the characters take on a life of their own and stop being the characters we know from the show, you were phenomenal at keeping them in-character while still elaborating on their lives. The dialogue alone was so genuinely them, sometimes I felt like I was reading a script. I really can't say enough about this, other than thank you, thank you, thank you for writing it. Bravo!

I LOVED this story. Completely loved it. Ran across it today and had to read it all. It was captivating and I loved the way you portrayed the characters. I hope to see more from you soon.

-Hannah

Okay, so its 2 years after you wrote this. I'm just reading it.

I just finished Chapter 18, and I would like to say that if you don't get them seriously together soon, I'm going to do something insane, like... blah I don't know. but something.

Really good writing though, the wonderfully subtle, but still noticeable change in Pam. Awesome.

Okay, so it took me a day and a half to read it, but this story was amazingly adorable. I like how it's not all happy endings. You said somewhere in here that on movies and tv shows there's always a place where the credits role and everything is wonderful, but I love how you didn't do that here. It was hard. They didn't live out all their dreams and become rich and famous with some sort of dream house out in the country. He's still selling paper, for heaven's sake, but they get through it. I love that. Excellent writing. Thanks. O:)

HEY! I just crash-coursed this story and read it in one day! (Sad, I know)! I'm procrastinating from doing homework! I just wanted to let you know how AMAZING this story was! I wanted to know if this story was complete or not, cuz it doesn't say! If it's not, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I see that you haven't updated since 2006, so I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that this story's done! It was incredible and beautifully written! It made me happy! Jim and Pam are the most outstanding couple! John and Jenna really bring them to life! Their chemistry if phenominal! Everything about this story was utterly brilliant! So, what I'm trying to say is 'Awesome job'!

Oh my god.

You just had me sobbing into my Reeses Puffs.

That was breathtaking!

I've just spent my morning reading this. Fantastic, utterly fantastic. I wish I could say more, but it's hard. Characterization: spot-on. Wonderful dialoge: perfect. Storyline/plot: amazing. Development: just right-not too fast, not too slow. In short, one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Thank you so much!

Always,

Margaret