cause we're willing to wait

I'm in for a "sequel"... anything for more Cole and Phoebe..

also, wondering if you're planning to finish "The Lost Ones"

thanks

Count me in for a sequel

Good story, I'm glad you finished it!

A few things to keep in mind:

1)Try to proofread your stories better. The biggest problem is in the conversations, using the wrong words can make it difficult to understand the context of the sentence.

2)The ending was a little too rushed, you tried to wrap up too much in just one chapter. The climax of your story is the most important part, but it only took up about half a chapter. For example, you could have ended the chapter at Jamie's statement that it was the Halliwells' fault for the way Wyatt turned out. The next chapter could have shown them dealing with it, maybe an appearance by Wyatt to show them just how bad it was? Then have Gideon's death and the part about the changed future in the last chapter.

Anyway, those were the major problems of the story. Hopefully you'll write another Charmed story.

the end...no! this cant be! the end? really?

what happened weith paige?

jusrt read the whole thing. thoguht the ending was lovely but a bit rushed. great fic overall though. i really liked it!

hey this is great! very interesting kind of freaky with wyatt being obsessed with his cuz and all that but watever

anyways i hope u update soon!

I love it. It's unique, please update soon.

update soon

Just read

great story update soon...cant wait for the revelation

Things are about to get interesting, I see. Looking forward to the next one!

i8t's ok

this chapter was brilliant

love chris' sentance

cnt wait till u nexta update

I love your story, thanks for the great update. I think it is hilarious that Leo is able to tell that Jamie is Phoebe's daughter but can not even sense that Chris is his son. That really is great, can't wait until your next update.

Cool chapter!

Jade

Wow, great chapter.