deep! i really, really like this, despite its dark nature and eerily twisted characterisation. i was really, really able to visualise the mitsuko you presented, with all her wrongs and brokenness, and it's refreshing to see her written as both the deceived and the deceiver. really nice work. thank you for writing!

Nice. Mitsuko makes a good lesbian...

Wow it's a great fic. You make Noriko look like a little bitch. Also it reminds me of Mitsuko's paat.

wonderful! so far one of the best i've read today. please keep up the good work of word usage and imagery. i look forward to reading more of your writing.

Woah, that was good. A realistic portrayal of Mitsuko with some vivid description, and I loved the doll theme running through the story. Also, you made the pairing convincing. Good work!

Very nasty and precise. Really builds feeling up, with a pretty good balance of fact and feeling. I don't know why 'probably doesn't have fingerprints...' couldn't be more definate, but that's a nitpick. Excellent.

I really like this-it makes me feel sorry for Noriko and it's given me a fic idea.

Poignant, sympathetic and introspective :) You really feel for what Mitsuko had to go through, and why she became like she became. Noriko is TOO perfect and it makes her unreal in a negative way; no-one can be that perfect. The more flaws a character has, the more interesting and appealing they are. And the last line is a killer also!