Im not sure what emotion I could use to describe this. Lol anyway this was great :)

This is delicious and does not have nearly enough love.

woah. that was deep. I liked it!

questions...are they going to sleep?or,...are teen-age hormones over-reacting?like the story.

Very interesting, fresh look at the Flock. Not many people take things in a darker direction, but you do it very well. Great job :)

i like it its nice and peaceful unike most fanfics, although they're hurt...love the song :)

~Brite

sweet

Okay... I'm confused.

Wow. I think this is a very nice perspective of Fang and Max's relationship. I love your style! Keep it up!

:D

I LOVE it.

okay, i dont say this kinda stuff often, but i really dont like it. i am sorry. i know you probably want positive reviews but i have nothing to say thats good. i really am sorry. i hate giving negative reviews!

That was incredibly. . . real.

I mean, I love shipping Fax as much as the next shipper, but the way that you presented the situation just seems so much more logical. You know?

Well, of course you know, you wrote it, but still.

In reality, they wouldn't be able to do the whole "I love you, let's be together forever" thing. Nor would they want to.

But, seriously, that was awesome to read. On a scale of 1 to 10, at least a 13.

-Lily

Was fab, nice one =)

Sad but sweet. I hope things turn out better for them than that.

That was AWESOME. AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME. Really good job! Love it!