Wow. This was great- I love the poetic bite of your words, and the way you describe both brothers is spot-on. Every word they say can be heard as if it's actually a line from the show. Really awesome job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!

You officially made me cry with this one. PERFECT characterisation of Dean (and Sam of course), again. So intense, amazing, and mindblowing, it seriously blew me away.

"“Because I can’t, Sam! I can’t. I don’t exist in that world you want to run back to so bad. Dean Winchester is dead. He’s dead, Sam. He can’t go to college or be a cop or a mechanic. He can’t buy a house. He can’t be with Cassie. He can’t do any of that because he is dead.”"

- It was that part that brought tears into my eyes, and I had Dean in front of my eyes,my heart hurting and aching for jumpin in and giving him a huge hug, screamin "No Dean, you're not dead, you're everything to Sam and so much people outthere" in my head...man I was suffering *lol*

But Sam cared well and dealed with that all Sammy-ly and these two guys are just the bestest brothers in the whole world and I love them *sighs happily*

And you did GREAT ! VERY well done!

Kritty

That was awesome. Even though my stomach is now in knots...

Just found this story and am thoroughly impressed! Great insights and characterization, it was just riveting. Well done!

Great fic, I think you got into the boys heads really well. You bought up some interesting issues as well that I haven't seen many writers tackel. Well done.

Wow. I forgot to copy my favorite parts to paste into the review. I forgot to breathe. This is beautiful. What I like most is the even-ness. Sam and Dean as equals, this is rate in SN fics it seems... most prefer one brother or the other, and it shows in the writing. You allow them to be independent and yet necessary to one another. Fabulous.

My only comment is that I think it would be stronger without the T-rated language - I understand where you're coming from, but sometimes it gets in the way of the point instead of accentuating it.

Good stuff, very good stuff.

Powerful and TRUE! Oh so true. You nailed it, you nailed them. You are...This was...Damn. I don't have the words. But I bet YOU do. Awesome piece. Please write more. Thanks.

nice!

This was good.

*standing ovation* Awesome. Completely heartfelt and bittersweet and I love it. Great job, great character insight.

Thanks for sharing,

emily

wow. very cool.

Now that... THAT was much more clear, concise, and all the more powerful for it. Well done with this one. Simply put, well done.

Very interesting. Catch ya on the flip side.

Perfect.