This is such a great idea. Kinoc's certainly not a character who gets a lot of attention, or even in-game development, but you've done him justice and then some. Great job. :3

As a side note, you've got some then-than confusion at the beginning there. Overall, though, this was excellent.

You've made Kinoc a fascinating character. Loved the quotes at the beginning- they really set the tone.

Hrm, I never really payed much attention to Kinoc, really, but this is kinda interesting. Lovely writing. :3

Good story. Were the other two cadets anybody in particular, or just random?

Wow...wonderful story! I really liked the way you portrayed Kinoc. His friendship with Auron was pretty much unexplained in the game; your interpretation makes him seem more than he ever did to me before. Great job!

Well written and believable. *Adds to favorites*

Fabulous character sketch of Kinoc, and a slightly younger and more hotheaded but still so-honorable and a bit brusque Auron. Sorry I didn't see it before! (I'm prowling storyless' favlist.)

I really liked it!

That was really nice. Well done.

Wow, that's quite good. I never thought that Kinoc would actually have had a past like this...even if Seymour suggested it.