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x-Ray-Ray-x 6/1/06 . chapter 1
Me: That was so beautiful... I had an actual tear come to my eye!

Sasha: -.-' Oh please...

Me: Ya had a tear in ya eye aswell... seriously chick...

Sasha: whatever. this story ruled!
Layla Fairy 6/1/06 . chapter 1
Sweet! I don't normally go for OttoNova but that was the cutest! I feel relly sorry for Otto!
Blackrose 5/31/06 . chapter 1
OH!I feel so sorry for Otto but I feel sorta glad for Soprx but in reality SPRX CAN TAKE HIS LOVE TO AURORA 6 BECAUSE NOVA AND ANTAURI ARE MADE FOR EACHOTHER AND HE SHOULD ONLY COME NEAR HER WHEN HE GIVES HER TO ANTAURI!Sorry,I just got high on the suger I had 1 hour and 59 minutes ago.Well keep the good work!BYE! =3
Dark Tailz not logged in 5/31/06 . chapter 1
This is okay but I think you sould change the ending a little to have look like this BVD!

Nova Hey Otto, You know if it doesn't really work out between me and Sprx, me and you might still have a chance to be together one day. You never really can tell with true love Otto.

Otto Thanks Nova, I'll try my best to keep that in mind. That we could be together one day. And you know something Nova your worth the wait just keep that in mind as well would ya, Nova.

Nova Don't worry Otto I'll always keep that in mind as well as close to my heart about me and you Otto.
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