| Reviews for Unknown Relations: The Philosopher's Stone |
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Vampireking40 chapter 1 . 10/2 From what I read in this first chapter. I would have to assume Orion is actually Harry Potter the forgotten son of the Potter family. |
Calmzone1 chapter 12 . 9/26 Well done! Great story. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10 Chapters 1 & 2 were great, but this chapter is mostly word-for-word straight from JKR's book. I've already read that. I don't think I can wade through acres of canon to find out about Orion's intriguing past. |
JohnlockpokiSnarrysabriel chapter 12 . 5/15 I would also like to say that the people flaming have no idea what they’re talking about. |
JohnlockpokiSnarrysabriel chapter 12 . 5/15 I love this so much. I usually don’t like twin fics that much, but I really like this one. Keep writing |
Anon chapter 5 . 1/18 Instead of doing something more, you just took an idea and bypassed through all the events in an totally underwhelming manner. |
Noradin chapter 4 . 11/17/2017 I'm not quite sure how Neville would turn out as timid as in canon when his parents are alive, nor how the same excuse as in canon would still apply. |
Noradin chapter 3 . 11/17/2017 The Gryffindor choice seems ok, but meeting Hermione on the train this way feels contrived and picking Hedwig is just unnecessary and unlikely unless you want to introduce totem animals next. |
Noradin chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 This is a bit of a summary at the beginning and thus a bit short on details. |
EmeraldSlytherin chapter 11 . 8/12/2017 I've always wanted to know what would happen if Sirius and James meet each other. Now my alarmingly curiousity is satistified. Thank you. |
NouvelleVoix chapter 1 . 5/4/2017 I _really_ don't understand why Harry/Orion would be going to Hogwarts before his letter, nevermind how ridiculously far ahead you're making him in his education. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 3 . 4/27/2017 Why would Sirius give Harry the name "Orion?" Makes zero sense. Sirius hated his abusive father. |
LBII chapter 12 . 4/11/2017 I am really pleased to read a twin fiction that has Harry and his twin attempt to be friends. Having Sirius being serious {could not help it} was unusual too. I am ready to read the next one. Thank you for sharing your time, talents and imagination with us readers. |
BillBrink chapter 12 . 4/8/2017 I enjoyed your writing. Thank you for sharing it. |
Ugh chapter 3 . 4/6/2017 It's annoying how every author feed a stupid reason to befriend Harry and Hermione. |