| Reviews for Child's Play |
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| chapter 6 . 12/7/2006 Hey! Nice story! :) i liked it! but why does it take a lot of time to update it? it's already december. |
| chapter 6 . 11/1/2006 Hi! Excellent story! Your sis led me to your story and I was glad that I found it! Hope u continue writing Inu/Kag stories! I LOVE Inu & Kag! LOL! |
| Moreta Lynx chapter 5 . 8/22/2006 Sry it took me so long to review, I was rather busy *playing World Of Warcraft*, but now that I have the time *the Bloodscalp server is down* I wanted to say that this chap, rocked. the last part was a suprise, usually I've read all the material at least 6 times b4 it ever sees FF, I could always see Kouga/Kagura...well that is once Kouga got over the slaughter of most his tribe by Kagura...I really like how they turned out. I can't wait to see the events un-fold. *Looks at other readers and sings* 'I know somthing you don't know!' *Esk42 glares at Moreta who then smiles evily and runs away, bursting into insane giggles* |
| Langus chapter 6 . 7/28/2006 You can add another reviewer/reader to your list. I have really enjoyed your story so far. It's very well written! I can't wait to read the rest. Good luck and happy writing! |
| The Kouga Lucius Connection chapter 6 . 7/28/2006 your still awesome. love. KOLU |
| The Kouga Lucius Connection chapter 5 . 7/7/2006 HAHAHA, wolfboy and windbag, I cracked up. *jab* "sigh, yes dear." Oh Kouga, whipped by Kagura; that brought me joy. I'm so glad I inspired you and absolutely, Sukini is yours to use however you want! Great chapter, I'm very intrigued by what you might presnet with Kouga and Kagura. Hehehe...tingles with excitement... KOLU |
| The Kouga Lucius Connection chapter 4 . 7/6/2006 I don't know what you meant; I thought this was a great chapter! Your description of the hospital rythym was to die for, by far my favorite part; i can see that now. When you can see the words described so clearly, you know its golden script. When I saw Sukini, I laughed, haha. Oh Sukini, by far the best pet name in existence, ne? Fabulous as usual. KOLU |
| The Kouga Lucius Connection chapter 3 . 7/5/2006 OH MY GOSH, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! I really enjoyed the concept, I'd like to say that first; it's new to me and I hate to brag, but I've been a member for three years and I've read a good deal of Inuyasha fanfiction in that time; if it's out there, I probably would've seen it. Your characterization of Sesshomaru is absolutely perfect. One thing I don't understand is how the doctor knows Inuyasha; that interests me. I really enjoyed this story! You frickin' rock! I wanted to be constructive, but I can't think of anything bad, haha. KOLU |
| Moreta Lynx chapter 2 . 7/2/2006 Sis, Even tho I'd read your description of the Inu-Pun, it reduces me into a puddle of goo every. single. time. He's so freak'in cute it hurts. |
| Tangled-Web-Of-Lies chapter 3 . 6/30/2006 Hearing from Kagome was great, as was the mad scientist thing. _ I don't know why you haven't gotten more reviews-this story is very interesting. Best of luck with the writing. It was a very good idea to write your so much of your story before beginning to post. That should help to keep the characters and plotline consistant. Eagerly awaiting the next installment, Kat (Tangled-Web-Of-Lies) |
| Tangled-Web-Of-Lies chapter 2 . 6/30/2006 I agree that it was nice to have a chapter for both Kagome, and the child. Only Inu-Yasha would be pleased that he passed on the trait of messy eating to his son... _ Great job! |
| Tangled-Web-Of-Lies chapter 1 . 6/30/2006 O_O Wow. I don't think that I've ever read a fic that started out like that. It was quite excellent, in my opinion, although I do have two questions. I realize that this takes place after Naraku's defeat, but why is Sesshomaru in Kagome's time? Did he go through the well, or has he just lived a really long time? Maybe I missed the answer. Anyway, I have one more question. Why are the doctors all demons? I wasn't aware that there were that many demons in the present era. Anyway, that doesn't really matter, and this fic should be interesting. Hoping that Kagome will be alright, Kat (Tangled-Web-Of-Lies) |
| angelXofXpeace chapter 3 . 6/28/2006 hurry and update or i will get pissed! |
| Janine C. Funk chapter 2 . 6/28/2006 Oh... WOW! This is fantastic! Truly, I'm almost rendered speechless, but alas, I do have one little suggestion: a smidgen of background information always does good when it comes to explaining the present. I'm a bit lost as to how Sesshomaru is in the present era, but as I was reading I was also pondering events in the series (had Naraku been defeated prior to the events in the story?). Just teeny-tiny little things. Perhaps it is just my hyperactive, caffeine-high, consistently fidgety mind... _ Perhaps you've already answered my questions is your next chapters! But anyway! I love your writing! You've done an awesome job so far! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more! |