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Krystal-Fairy
12/24/08 . chapter 11
Hi! I'm a great fan of your SW fics, and I'm glad you updated.(What a nice X-mas gift!) Also, I can't tell how much I laughed with this chapter: “There’s a green troll on the couch.” LOL... Please update soon! Merry Christmas!
Tashilover
12/24/08 . chapter 11
You updated! Yea! Time for me to do a little jig! La daa...do do da...

Anyhoo! It's understandable that Obi-Wan felt just a twinge of jealously that Yoda came to Bandomeer because of Anakin, and not of HIM. Who wouldn't feel like that? Hee hee hee. I love those boys so much.

But oh no, is Anakin already on his way to the darkside? Heck, I'm surprised he isn't already there, considering all the bs he's gone through. I don't know what'll take him to be push over that edge in this AU. Anyhoo, update soon!
KnoKnayme
12/24/08 . chapter 11
you write wonderfully... keep going... this is getting good!

oh merry xmas by the way...
Dream's Abyss
12/24/08 . chapter 11
Excellent! I just finished rereading it too!

Of course I have to wonder what the council expected to come of meeting Anakin, especially if they never planned on training him.
fairlyironic
12/24/08 . chapter 11
Yeah, another chapter, thank you :)
Archaeologist
12/24/08 . chapter 11
This was wonderful. I loved how Obi-Wan still wanted to be a Jedi, even if he wasn't saying it or even thinking it. The regret just pours off him.

And now Yoda is here, not to see Obi-Wan but Anakin. Again Obi is a reject. He's a very good person not to be jealous of that obvious fact.

The Jedi need to learn much about training and choosing practices.

Great job.
White Sherry
12/24/08 . chapter 11
YAY! An update! You really made my day with this.
Barranca
12/24/08 . chapter 11
I'm glad to see the update!

No matter that Anakin is not a Jedi in your story and will not be trained - again we have the opposing sides of the council, who think he is too old and altogether to fearful, and headstrong Anakin.

Merry Christmas!
Phamalama
12/23/08 . chapter 11
A developing chapter! I liked how Yoda decided to pop in and tell them that Anakin is strong with the Force. I hope you update this story more frequently in the future!
knit-wear
12/22/08 . chapter 1
i love stumbling upon something good to read like this. you write very well- so i'm off to read the rest now! excellent start! very in character and such like. x
Dream's Abyss
12/19/08 . chapter 9
I can't help but wonder how Obi-Wan would react to seeing Yoda again. It's enough to make the hardest heart break...
Clemen
12/4/08 . chapter 10
Great story. It a very good AU fic not at all OOC. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Until next time, take care and god bless.
Pthalo Blue
11/27/08 . chapter 10
I was really expecting a downright smutty fic. But the fact that you're taking this slow, adding actual plot with villians and side stories and...and other great stuff, you have my downright respect. Please update soon, I love this story.
Pthalo Blue
11/27/08 . chapter 3
Oh my, poor Anakin. The idea that he was ripped from his mother is a horrible thought in itself and it happened when he was so young! I was half afraid when i started reading this, Obi-Wan WAS buying Anakin because he was beautiful (as I read in some other fics) but the fact that Obi-Wan's intentions were true and not at all lustful in anyway puts a smile on my face. It makes this fic so much more believable.
Dream's Abyss
10/2/08 . chapter 10
Poor Obi-Wan, he's so clueless. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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