So you cancel a good story YOU ARE PATHETIC YOU CALL YOUR SELF A WRITER

Excellent story! By the way what happened to Sakura? You stated that she was still in love with Sasuke during one of the timeskips. But after that she just disappears. Does she die? I hope not. I can see Sasuke taking his anger out on Sakura and beat her. Make her his slave. I feel like this would force her to keep loving him for her safety and her life. I can see Sakura redeem herself if she helps Naruto in some way.

please update

snow princess I vote for her to be the second wife

Pleas update

Ok when sauske Said he would kill him and take it for him self i wonder if he knows that's not how it works

that was good keep the chapters coming

I'd say sakura's "thought" if you can call it that... Doesn't really apply here, if she was BEATING him, she kinda had to see how badly Naruto was injured, add to the fact that the other villagers joined in... and well... That "I had no idea"... Don't hold much water in this story.

YOU DID A GOOD JOB WITH THIS STORY! I AM GOING TO MISS IT! THANK YOU!

The oc.

Tooo fucking late.

You're very dark.

I love your story, please update soon.

Wow good stuffs i enjoy Naruto leaving the village fics as long as done right and this one was done well. Loved hinata running away with naruto then zabuzza having a twin. Ice village was some fun stuff. Also your oc's were pretty well made. Loved how most of rookies were good. I really like most of the rookie 9. Only a few things that could be fixed. One it went a little quickly at times like the akatuski fight and just over all it went kinda fast but over 90% of fics either go to fast or are drawn out. And yours at least kept me entertained. Also tsundre being naruto's mother was odd but since this was written before it showed who naruto's parents were its all good. Hope you write more in the future

What the fuck get this story un cancelled you fuckin idiot I'm fed up of people abandoning good story's