this is fucking brilliant man I absolutely adore it. You're amazing and talented. I bow to you.

Nicely done. You'd definitely got down the sort of relationship Tyler and the narrator have. I like the part about 'ownership,' that whole line made a lot of sense.

Love it.

Love your style.

Love Fight Club.

Perfect.

This was good but you do know that it's 'Jack' not 'Joe' right? Or did i just miss a joke?

I am Joe's gigantic grin indeed.

Fantastic, in character, and written in a way that would make Chuck smile.

hey that was pretty good. i liked how you put in the thing about "joe."

This is my first review for a piece of fanfiction.

Not bad at all!You captured Chuck Palanuik(hopefully I've spelled the surname correctly)'s style I saw the film,I thought Tyler and Joe were gay until The Big Twist all,Tyler is telling Joe that they don't need girls..in a bathroom...