So I recently just took up fanfic and your "story" (idk what to call it) intriguid me. I think you are very creative and some of the Itachi parts scared me because I have a huge poster of him :/ Anyways, good job! I loved this very much and I hope you continue writing.

OMFG! So awcsome all of your story's are keep it up hey maybe you might become a famous author

ERMAGWAD! okay this was the most amazing story I'VE EVER read. No joke. Especially with the two people I ship the most. I was blown away by this and yet very moved. I absolutely love how you kept everyone in character no matter what. Oh! and how you made zabuza, Huko (Not sure if that's right) his 'pimp'. THAT was funny, along when kakashi pinned up the picture Sasuke drew of Naruto and himself, hilarious. Just amazing! You inpire me and please keep writing. your truly gifted and amazing. And I kind of hope all this was too much, o, it felt like too much. I'm so stupid.

I don't know why...but I don't like this chapter! I mean...naruto seems to be such a cry baby...it's a little bit too much :3

You truly are a good writer _ Will you plz write a real violantic fanfic 'bout sasukexnaruto? plz..plz...plz...I really love violence :3

i love this story and the ships you put in it good job!

why shes suck and shes an ass and see shouldnt hit naruto that much

Great story but the ending is not something that going to destroy the WHOLE STORY but still good in general ;-)

may i asking what happen to sasuke and naruto?

I would've killed you first

OH MY GOD! I don't know if you come on anymore but I read this from 7 in the after noon and went to sleep at 11:30 and found a way to read it all the way during school and I just finished it.. i know.. SLOW READER! But I loved it.. One of my favorites by far! 3

I was so sad it ended... *tears up* BUT IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL

awww :3

THAT WAS FLIPPING AWESSOOOMMMMEEEEE :DDDD
YOUR AN AMAZAYN (look it up :P) WRITER :DDDD
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BEST NARUTO AND SASUKE FANFIC EVAH!

uhh... I should've stopped reading when it was still good around chapter 6 or so... Cause when you started trying to add in different povs it got so, again... Frustrating to read. You're an awesome author, and I like this story. But I barely know anything that was happening in the past 15 or so chapters because I scrolled all the way down thinking that chapter is irrelevant because it's just Shika again talking about Tenmari... Maybe cause I'm more ShikaIno? But it was boring. The ending... Uh... Wut? Just going to remember the beautiful first few chapters...