Ha! Nice story! The only thing I found wrong was the spelling of "riding hood", but otherwise great!

great story, i enjoyed it much.

Hehehehe. Really sweet story :) Thanks for a great read.

I really think you got the Ron Factor down in this story (did he bake the cookies?). It definitely sounded like the kind of story he would tell.

Especially the Josh Monkey. For some reason Drakken reminded me of Yertel the Turtle.

The switching of Nana's medication was a master stroke.

My favorite part was Katie's take on the story's moral.

One question though ... what was up with Shego's reference to Kim's "fat little legs?"

Great job, I really enjoyed that!

The Zorpox genes will be passed down for all the generations!

Good work, but there wasn't enough communism ;)

very cute & imaginative

I really enjoyed it, especially Katie going after cookies at the end.

FUNNY! A very original combination of classic story and KP! The way you used previous show characters as animals was very funny! :)

I'd LOVE to hear another Ron bedtime story to that Katie girl! LOL! :)

How about Snow White? or Alice in Wonderland next?

Keep on writing! :)

Excellent story! I was already laughing as soon as Motor Bunny Ed popped up in the story. Lol, rabid woodland creatures...I like how you included the villains as furry pests. The outlier was Josh...Monkey, of course, but it was nice to have Kimmie-cub clobber him anyway. This modern fairy tale was very nicely done. Cheers.

Hilarious adaptation! The dialogues are greatly done.

Keep the good writing.

I love it, she is evil...lol

At least she covered dad up before she went to the kitchen...lol

Bubba

Hm, very clever. I like the concept of making Kim's enemies into little woodland creatures (Though I can't really see Josh Mankey throwing himself in with that lot)

Another thing, I think it would have been a bit more in line with the KP universe had the "noble woodcutter" actually helped Little Red during the fight, 'cause Ron actually does help Kim when she fights.

So, um... just what is the moral of the story?

That was pretty funny.

This was quite good. Especailly, the part about politicains, that was great. This is probably the funniest version of Little Red Riding Hood I've ever read and/or seen. Keep up the good work.