Nice story

Nice story please keep it up

So would you believe. For the past three days i was REreading this fic? From chap 1 to 36. Couldn't review 36 because they don't allow repeat reviews per chapter as im sure u remmeber. ^_^

Yo! I really like this story. I've never read it before and I am a huge Naruto fan. Even though this story is already complete, I keep hoping with all that I am that Naruto won't die. If he does, then please write another chapter that shows what happens if he survives. I you can, That'd be awesome!

I loved your story, it was one of the best stories that i have ever read, and it couldnt have been better; congradulations man you have one freakin' kickass story, good job!

This story is...captivating. It is sad, romantic, and something else that i find hard to describe.

You relly are an amazing author. even with the little blurb in the beginning.

The most enjoyable aspect of this fic was the pure dedication that you put into it. I judge fanfictions by different standards than most people. I use character development, detail and the way that you write to draw the reader in. If I had to give you a score between 1-10 I would definently give you an 11. Congradulations on your end product and I hope to read more by you.

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing it. ^_^

I fell in love with the Naruto series when it first came out but now I am dissappointed in it. I can honestly say that I wish this story was how it actually ended up. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Bravo, absolutely the most emotional story ive read for Naruto. It was just plain awesome how their emotions came across BRAVO! 10/10!

wow that was the best ever keep writing masterpieces like that. ha ha u should try and get permission to make this a book or something...:P

that was really good!

it was great...

i laughed i cryed... i cried even harder when my sister came and tookover the computer and i had to wait until later to read more...

it was wonderful!

in all honesty, I apologise for being a picky little pest, but tihs is just a topic that I have extensive experience in researching. for future reference, use kaze no tsuin yaiba, or twin blades of wind, maybe just tsuin yaiba, twin blades. it probably seems like I'm getting angry about incorrect translations, but I'm only trying to help for future reference.

once more, incorrect translation, souansha heijin means twin propellers sword blade. the other translations are inventor sword blade, and originator sword blade. you cut out at least three syllables.