Loved the dynamic evolving between Tifa and Cloud. This was an enjoyable read, too bad it havent been updated in 6 years. Anyway if you still are there, Thanks :)

Tifa annoys me and her big boobies too. -scowl- Noone can fight with big boobs. I find her as non-important other or just a sister/motherish to cloud. I hope to see another chapters soon! _

I have to say as much as I love this yaoi pairing
(and as common and as rarely written well as they are),
I find mentor/parent more appealing because it is something rare to me ( I am not aware of many of those). Anyway good story, I look forward to the next chapter. _

Instill have hope that you'll update soon! It's a suberb story!

This is cool, it makes sense and I'm kinda a sadist so I love all the killing.

BUT. I already fucking /hate/ Tifa. And the way she's being so goddamn pushy and annoying just pisses me the fuck off.

You probably aren't going to update this, which is unfortionate.

~Dawn/Elli

UPDATE!

I'm hooked on this story! It explains things in KH in a much more preferable way to me. It's well written and believable. Sorry for the crappy, short review- but I'm anxious for the next update.

I still have hope! :) I know it has been awhile and RL is important, so no sweat. I'm going to just wait patiently for the new post when ever that may be. Thanks for sharing your great work with us readers.

Great story overall, just one tiny detail after the slaughter scene, when it's just getting dicey between Cloud and Sephiroth.

'He felt Cloud shudder until his menstruation, and he growled playfully when the blonde did...'

Menstruation is the woman's fertility cycle, translated this phrase means, "He felt Cloud shudder until he began his female fertility cycle."

I believe the word you were actually thinking of is ministration, which means an action or deed. Menstruation is just kinda awkwardly placed.

Sorry for the english lesson, you've still done a wonderful job making Cloud and Sephiroth have believable personalities and creating gripping action scenes that have readers on the edges of thier seats.

Ciao~

awwwww too bad your not gonna finish this story it was really good!

Sad that this stopped at ch9. i would have enjoyed reading this... very good fiction, too bad its discontinued

awww, i love this story. cloud is so cute as a hungry little beastie!

I love your stories so much -in awe- sorry for the fail review XD

I can't believe I haven't read this before! It was an awesome read D Shame that it hasn't been updated for a year and a half, though. I'd very much like to read Sephy's punishment to Cloud...

Too bad rl's a b*tch, isn't it? I should be reading a school book for my English class right now...but I'd rather read Darkness Rising... Hm... which should I do...?

Well, anyway, if/when this decides to update, I'll be early to know. Added to alert list!

This is for chapter nine! PLEASE UPDATE THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! i can not wait to see what happens to cloud!

One word: AMAZING! The way Cloud and Sephiroth interact, their personalities, and their completely unique relationship is...just wow! I really like this. Will you update any time soon? Please?