So good! poor mi'ji!

This is a great story. The reader can feel all of the emotions going through the characters (especially Momiji's) mind. The way you end the story makes the line seem to echo in the readers mind.

is there a secule?;D good story i cried a little bit D:

Wow that made me cry. You have to update, please? I'm seriosuly crying. Poor momiji, how could a mother do that?

That was beautiful! You capture one's pov very well. Please continue with more.

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That was brilliant. I don't read Fruits Basket, so I'm not up-to-date on Momiji's situation, but this was great. :D

(P.S. Theora?)

that was so good, i was just crying through the whole thing. maybe you could write more about when momiji's mom sees him.

Very, very cute! I think you got the characters down pat, and what Tohru said to Momiji's father is someething I can see her actually saying! Very nice! Although I having someone read over your work carfully, because there were a couple of typos. Otherwise, it was really nice to read, although I don;t know how happy Akito will be with the whole plan at the end.

This is so beautiful. I absolutely loved the last line! This is my second time reading this and I still love it so much!

that's quite cute!

Hi! Logged into my school computer so i can't sign into my own account . . . but i really do like your story! It's so sad, and it really did capture Momiji's inner turmoil. I really like your story, and i do think that Momiji is one of the coolest characters in furuba. Great story! Continue writing more!

::Wow:: That was the best Momiji fic I've read. Downright sweet and sad at the same time. Love it!

That is so...sad? Happy? Thank you so much!

Kyu... Thats so sad! :'( And yet so cute!

I hope to see more of your writing soon!...

Ja ne; bye-bye

ah! it's so sad and sweet! *tear*

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