This is awesome... though I must say, I thought it was Harry that he was fantasizing about.

I like this as a parody of fanfiction- in which the R/S/T triangle is SO overdone . . .

well...! that certainly wasn't what i expected - lovely twist! you write very well - well enough to be extremely deceptive - and yeah. great work!

You evil!

Ok, you fooled me... but that was your goal! ;-)

Bye

Ew, that's so OOC! Remus wouldn't ask Tonks to morph into another person if he truly loved her. Terrible beyond words.

Wow! This was really good! You've probably heard this already, but i really thought that you were having tonks change into sirius. but then it was lily and i was amazed. you are a wonderful author, up on rowlings level of deception! this was wonderful!

-anna

Even if this isn't canon, it's still really good. It is possible that Remus did like Lily, but was too shy to tell her. Anyway, great job. I really enjoy reading the stuff you write.