You've spelled Dolores Umbridge's name wrong. It's not Delores, it's Dolores.

I immensely enjoyed reading your fic. I had a huge grin from the beginning to the end. Thank you

Thank you for a very enjoyable story ]

Truly an enjoyable and delightful story!

Amazing story. I’m totally in awe. I love McGonagall and you’ve totally captured her. All the supporting characters seemed very genuine as well. I love seeing Sinistra being fleshed out like this as well. Very nice work. I’ll be reading anything you write

Ok, I've been cackling like mad during the whole fic. I'm positive that someone would have thought I was a witch too in that moment, had anyone seen me. Please keep it up, it's wonderful, I want to assist to the humiliation of our dear toadlike High Inquisitor

This is the greatest thing I have ever read in my life. You are a magical person.
Literally I laughed more in the last hour than I have all week!
McGonagall is my favorite and you write her pppeeerrrfffeeecccttttllllyyyyyy
I love you with all my heart and soul

Now this is a fic.
You've added an extra day to my life. As an entirely different person.
Great work.

Thank you so much for writing this. It is the most interesting and hilarious piece of writing I have read in... most of my life.

G

There are few fanfictions that can boast of profoundly capturing my attention in such a way that is unrivaled. I am most pleased to say you have suceeded monumentally. I have revisited this piece of art more times than I can be persuaded to admit and i regard it as one would an old friend accompanied by a glass of wine and years to catch up on.

Dear Biscuit:

Two things. First, this is a positive delight so far, and I thank you for it. Second, when Snape is bawling out Trelawney, it should be "a catatonic state"; "cationic" refers to positively charged atoms. (And Umbridge's Christian name is spelled "Dolores".)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

I love this so much! I loved McGonagall before but now I've gained a new appreciation for her. Your characterization is brilliant! Amazing job on this!

Really fun read !

This was great