kawaii! It's so sweet and good and cute and whole bunch of other words I can't seem to think of write now. I love the RenRuki in this and this story is just how do i say it? KAWAII to the max!

I love it. The interaction between Renji and Rukia, was easy going and it flowed, there were no little hitches in there. And to me they were pretty much in character, I like how you made Renji put his arm around Rukia's shoulder, it made this story just that much more personal. I liked it.