great story, it's wonderful, continue soon, best regards, bye!

That ending literally killed me

"Hitogoroshi" has to the worst self-fulfilling prophetical name I've ever seen.

amazing story, the best naruto fic I've read to date

I should have listened when he said, quit at the first chapter. It's shit. Don't read it

I hate Ino. She's a bitch

Dude you more than get the benefit of the doubt here for awesomeness since you wrote this masterpiece before a lot of shippuden even became cannon. I'm am intrigued on you're intentions though. You said ino has a reference to the Mokuton. Are you perhaps about to make ino a relative to the first. That would be interesting, and I've literally never ever seen a story incorporate something so unique in it.

I love your story :) all the description of the event and all character way to speak was so realistic. Is FANTASTIC! I love NaruIno too and i can say this fanfiction is one of the best i ever read. Dont care about stupid people who come only to review bullshit or offend you. They are just stupid kid. You are awesome and i hope you make another sequel too

An amazingly interesting fic! I enjoyed it to the fullest. Completely AU from the Canon which makes it so unpredictable and addictive! The chapters are a bit long which makes it kinda hard to read but suddenly my opinion:-) All in all, it's one of the finest fics I've read in 2018!

to much oi

You need to check your spelling. There are several instances of typos throughout your work. An automatic spelling and grammar check would solve this, like the one on Word or many other types of writing softwares.
I also believe that several of your characters are slightly OOC though you've explained most of the discrepancies as influences of different characters during an impressionable stage of their lives. Overall this story is good and interestingly darker than the original material, closer to the true purpose of shinobi.

I gotta say there are a few nails in this coffin... ino's weird changes in character from one paragraph to the next, weird jumps then backtracks on character development. Randomly pushing dates and 'romance' when the team's have barely developed . Way too fast strength development. Stupid secrets revealed b.s...etc... this is the chapter I got to...can't deal with it anymore...I was hopeful... But the beginning does not last. U would probably be better with a different style of writing... but so far...ur going more and more off the wall...

really wish he didnt have the last name...

It isnt that naruto CAN'T get drunk. Particularly at a young age he is more likely to be susceptible. It was only ever that his metabolism meant he would recover at an accelerated rate potentially enough to bypass a hangover altogether.
And since being drunk has more to do with a lack of fluids to the brain than not...
Getting to the point of passing out is actually really easy. Its the condensed chakra that throws theoretical recovery out the window though. Between the natural uzumaki endurance, massive chakra capacity (this isnt even taking into account the kyuubi) and the sheer level of Bull. SHIT. Chakra can do with enough of it, and insta healing is a very viable option. The 2nd could spit a veritable lake outta his mouth using no other source. Literally just making the shit. Conversion of energy into mass allows for so many BS veriables that frankly its a good thing you went with the logic you did. More entertaining and relatable that way.

Lolololololololol
You literally flat out told us with that argument at the start!
And i didn't realize it was genuinely a demon spider til the broodmother herself came out.
It was so obvious it wasn't.
Well played.