WOW..pure awesomeness! love it ! :D

You did it wrong.

Mark my words.

I will somehow control you and make them SMEX NEXT TIME.

Can you to continuou(to write 2 part)this story?

Sorry,I'm from Russia,I know English so bad!=)

really good... it's not so OOC... actually none at all. I've noticed that both of their personalities exagerate around each other... not the normal kind but, Temari either gets very violent, or quite calm. Shikamaru is more lazy, or more fun? Interesting? Less languid?

So it wasn't really OOC.

is the story over cause its good i want shikamaru to be owned by temari some more and if they concluded it together it would be good. or some more stores like this

BB

Even though it was OOC for temari, it was a good idea and I liked it!

WOW! That was actually really good! Very funny! Loved it!

Wow, looks like someone went pretty far to get an obnoxious, lazy, cocky, misogynist ass in her bed. x3 Hilarious. XD

that waz good

...This was so cute! Please don't make it just a one shot! I love this pairing, and this is one of the few good Naruto Fanfics I've read... one of the best acctually. Please add more? I really like this pairing.

I didn't find the OOCness that high...I found it rather amusing, and weird how Temari set the whole thing up.

you should continue this! SERIOUSLY! THIS IS AWESOME!

shikamaru's hot honey *^_^*

sheer awesomeness.

OMFGWTF! THE SHEER AWESOMENESS IS BLINDING ME!

XD! Nice story. want more. See, that's why I hate one shot. They always leave you wanting more.

heehee, i love the 'emotional out put of a rock' line. it really fits.

(WHOOPDEEDIDDLEDEE!)

OOC be damned, that was a great read. Funny too, with Temari liking botany and all. Just noticed the words below the submit review button... Ok, well the story could have been extended for at least three more days. Looking back on it you couldn't really tell Temari was a jounin, unless she had the day off just to bug Shikamaru. She seemed to have no responsibilities to tend to. Also, even though Shikamaru leaving was definitely funny, I think it would have helped if he admitted to himself that he kinda enjoyed Temari's company, and maybe she could have played Shogi with him. Either way, for what its worth, it was a nice read, and hopefully you write some more stories about em!