lol! fail ending... jk . i am reading this in 2011, i hope you're still writing lol

lol i think their predicaments are mildly humorous. it seems all of them knew who they loved before they got into their relationships. though, i do feel sympathetic for sakura. stress is bad 4 the baby

good chapteer

LOL 14 missions a week. but atleast hes willing 2 pay. the lemon was good lol

i loved the angst in this chapter and i usually dont like angst. ggreat job

Pretty nice story. I loved that they were both married and in love, the whole affair thing really.

Wow amazing story, I really enjoyed it you are a talented writer

This was good but it doesn't feel finished.

nice fic! I really didn't think about that Hinata would cheat on him during the story! In my opinion, that was the strongest piont in your fic.

good job!

Lol Child Support

I liked da story but... _ well goodness arnt you a little bowl of Fruity Pebble sunshine... lol depresed much. it was good but...kiba and hinata? NUUOO! Kiba tis mine! -glomps kiba plushie- ... -cough- fangirl spazz attack sorry... but umm the ending was all happy and the rest was all... 'evil freggen unicorns crapping rainbows and bunny kittens for everyone hugg land.' kinda off. So...it was good. And I liked it...I read it didnt i? .. okay now im just stalling cuz i is bored... -pokes, giggles and runs away-

i like ur story, u had a good plot but it felt unfinished, too many issues left on resolved.

really love fics like that. The plont, the descriptions evrything was great!

this fic actually made me not like hinata all that much

anyways this fic was just bittersweet all the way and i loved it^^

I loved this story and the way you made Hinata a whore (i dont relly like her). PLease write another really good story.

^_^