This fits perfectly with the episode- Sam freezing when he heard the shot had my heart in my throat. Then Dean trying to play it off. Perfect!

Excellent writing, thanks for the read

Oh, that was precious and so well done. Loved it, added it to my faves! Very good visuals and flow. Keep up the good work :)

Darkbird36

Oh, nicely done. I hadn't thought of the fact that Sam probably would have a vision.

I was just rec'd this story yesterday and can I just exclaim how excited I am to discover your Supernatural stuff? I love your explanation here for what was happening with Sam during his whole scene! I really enjoy how you write Sam and Dean!

This is really, really cute, without being out of character. Aw. I thought the part from Sam's "I saw you" to "yeah" was particularly well done (and the last couple lines are great, too). The whole story was very show-esque.

that was really good...

good job... im completely addicted to tag scenes i swear... good job

Good coda. Thanks for filling it in for us.

Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side.

I really like your view of the end of the episode, especially Sam's panic and confustion. Awesome job.

~SJ

Yes, that's a scene we needed! Thanks for filling it in - very well done.

I like how you say things without saying them. If that makes sense. Sorry! It's late and I'm incoherent.

Lovely little scene. There, that made sense...

Wow, you raise a good point. How come Sam didn't have a vision about what Anson was about to do to Dean. Maybe it's because fate always had in store a rescue for Dean by means of Andy? *shrugs* I don't know. Though, if you put it like that, then it would be contradictory to the Max/Dean vision. Sam's psychic abilities have only worked for Dean once. I wonder why that is.

Anyway, good fic, and great missing scene. I wonder if the writer's did that on purpose or did they just not have time for another vision or maybe they just missed it themselves. It's a thought provoking question.

Nice Job!