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lissiechan 9/19/08 . chapter 7
Chapters ago, I noticed you said this was a silly idea; I think completely the other way. This is wonderful material! In actual fact, your writting is very good and the idea you are developing is pretty good and highly original. I would love to see more chapters!
Mellow 8/17/07 . chapter 7
X_X update.

Now .
Krillin Fan 5/10/07 . chapter 5
Hey, I'm back! And a little fluey. Oh well. But, I said I'd be back, didn't I? Well, this chap was interesting, though seemed mainly filler stuff. I do have to admit, though, that perhaps the funniest thing about this chapter was probably on my end. I kept reading this one line where Trunks begs Vegeta no to turn him in to Bulma. Apparently a space was forgotten, because I read it over and over. I honestly thought Trunks was worried Vegeta was going to change him into Bulma for a second! I tell ya, lass, the things a sick mind comes up with are scary sometimes.

Well, since I'm too lazy to seperate this into a PM, I tell you now that Fulfillment has been updated. Yay. Your suggestion was actually quite helpful in determining a name for Juu's father, BTW. You should see what it means. You'll laugh!

Also, I have some more of the plot for my OGR sequel laid out. For one thing, my OC shall forever more be known as: Dex! Don't ask me why, it just popped into my head. As far as his love life goes, however, I've decided to pair him with both girls. Not in some weird three-way sorta thing, though! I mean that he'll start a relationship with one, cue painful and near planet-dooming break-up, then eventually find himself with the other. But what order to do it in...? Any suggestions? I know you said Bulla before, but I just wondered if the new info has changed your mind, or if you still favor her? Either way, a semi-detailed explaination would be cool. Well, gotta go, since this is all the time I have tonight. See Ya!
Anime Fan18.0 5/3/07 . chapter 7
NONONONONONONONONO! DON'T STOP! PU-LEASE COUNTINUE! *Gives Puppy eye look* This story is going great! As for cooking idea, well...*Sweatdrop* I don't know the first thing about cooking! Hehe...oi. Oh well, please don't abandon this story, because...you've got me on a cliffhanger! You don't like me when I'm on a cliffhanger!

DBZ fan-mob: *Smacks Anime Fan18.0 with "cji cji frying pans...again*

Me: OW! Oh, for the love of...man that gets old! Oh, anyway...PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

Signed: Anime Fan18.0
Anime Fan18.0 5/1/07 . chapter 4
Wow, this is a good story! I mean, this is a REALLY good story! The only thing I have against it is that it's taking me FOREVER to read it all! Lol! I'm gonna go ahead and leave a review for this chapter (Even thought normally I read through the whole thing before that), but I'll be back!

Signed: Anime Fan18.0
Krillin Fan 4/29/07 . chapter 4
Yet another disturbing look into Vegeta and Bulma's sex life. Gets a wee bit old after the ten millionth time! But otherwise funny. However, I'm gonna have to stop here for tonight, as I'm getting tired. BUT I SHALL COMPLETE THIS!
Krillin Fan 4/29/07 . chapter 3
Wow. That was good. This is honestly extremely funny! Well, I'm headed to the next chapter. And tis story is goin' in my favorites!
Yari 4/28/07 . chapter 1
Hey I'm loving this story it is amusing, and I love this idea! Not only do I love DBZ, but I also love Chef America, So PLEASE continue to update this fiction!
Anmylica 4/26/07 . chapter 7
I think a good secret ingredient would be ostrich. Yeah. I think I recall them doing that once on Iron Chef, and it was a really good battle. Or maybe it was ostrich eggs... Hmm. Or quail. Quail would be good too.
LGM 4/22/07 . chapter 7
hell no! dont stop,

do you have any idea how hard it is to find a story like this in the dbz world?

love it to bits must keep writing. . .
Krillin Fan 4/21/07 . chapter 2
Funny. I'm laughing my tail off over here! As for what you'd said before, about people being uncomfortable with the whole Vegeta/Goku implications, I don't see why. It's all in humor, at least so far. And, let's face it, I kinda find the whole "I'm not gay so stop thinking I am!" thing kinda sorta very funny. Especially from Vegeta! Unfortunately, this is all the time I have to read right now, as my mother needs to use the computer for some rather important business. Yes, I still live with my mom. Whoopdi-freakin'-doo. I'll read the rest soon, though, I promise! Oh, and just so you know, for some gay reason or other, will NOT send anything to my e-mail. No review alerts, no Pm's, nothing. And I checked, nothing's disabled, so I don't get it. Do you know what's goin' on?
The Ultimate Saiyan 4/16/07 . chapter 7
Awesome! Keep it up!
Supermysticwarrior 4/16/07 . chapter 7
Hi!

well..this story IS pretty good...although you could probably touch up a few aspects like character personality and humor, besides that it's very good...i think you should keep it up. The lack of reviews could be solved bu a more tempting summary and a bit of publicity for the story! maybe a review at a few stories asking to check it out or something...it works! But seriously, this story is good.

anyway

hope you keep it up

bye bye
Twin Tails Speed 4/16/07 . chapter 7
Well this is a chapter that was well worth waiting for. I it quite interesting, amusing and excellent.
DBZFanattic 4/15/07 . chapter 7
thank you for updating this good story
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