I know I'm reviewing...more than two years after this was posted...but still, I had to do it. I love your writing style; it's very unique and almost rhythmic.

I don't know why you don't have about fifty more reviews for this story, but it is very interesting and I like it.

OH my god! I can't believe you only have 3 effin reviews!

You should have atleast 100, FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER.

I absolutly love this story (...if it isn't obvious), specially the way you write. It's choppy, but gives so much detail, and I find myself reading each sentence like 10 times over, just so I can giggle at how much of a fangirl I am.

o.o;

Eheh. AND THE FIGHTING! -melts into a puddle-

You drive me crazy. I wish I could come to your house and like... slave drive you to write more.

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what's your address? 0:D

xDD

Just kidding.

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No seriously.

:)

pleasepleaseplease write more! If you do I'll give you a... fan art? xD

I'm horrible at drawing, so it'll probably be like... stick figures.

BUT I'LL TRY!

:)

First I must say that I am intriqued by your writing style and am really into your story thus far...I will respect yoir wishes and I will try to be patient,but I can't promise anything...LOL...But in return you must try to deliver future chapters of the same cali-

ber and intensity...I'll be a fan for the duration and will shower you with encourage-

ment...XD...XD...

Your quickly becoming one of my all time fave writers! I love how you describe things and this story just keep sucking me in more and more. "He shook himself of clawing octopus-people with no life of their own, and stalked off – because he rocked like that – in pursuit of bliss." That line actually made me giggle! Great work and hope you update again soon!

I just wanted to say that I for one ADORE your writing style. The way you decribe everything literally took my breath away. Some of my fav lines are "the sandpaper truth (scritchity-scratch across the ugly gash)" so little is said but so much is explained with just that line, and "He wondered if there was such a cure for a thing called bitch" because I've actually thought like that before. Just...amazing and I really hope that you keep it up.