APPLAUSE! APPLAUSE! WELL, I for one am MOST certain that you've accomplished the challenge with the utmost focus! IT WAS AWESOME! I just LOV'D the EDGE it had to it with the sexual tension and the oogling! AND of course Booth WAS displaying his "Alpha-male superiority" it's just SO HIM!

AGAIN Kudos on a job WELL DONE! And Second the motion that you met the requirements! LOL!

~G :D

They are in some kind of motion, but I think it's a more emotional one, a series of emotional realisations. Anyways I loved this story Siapom, very well written and unique take on the challenge. I loved how you described Brennan's uniqueness and I adored the way you had Booth study her. Very very good, good luck!

Ava

Very nice. Great detail plus with the right BB spark. Gives us just a *little* more of BB than the show itself for a warm fuzzy while still fitting what we see.

Great use of description, loved it.

I don't know what the challenge was, but this was very well written.

Thanks!

Very good. I see how you munipulated it a bit but it did have action in it. Just not the brawl type. lol

I loved this short fan fiction. You captured the characters so well it was like watching it play in front of my mind just like they do on tv. Keep it up please.

Hee. Not quite what I imagined, considering the requirements of the challenge, but I loved it. A complete contrast from the chase scenes, fights, etc. I expected with the Action! theme, but this was wonderfully subtle. Suggestive, but so perfectly in canon.

Thank you for making my...11:30PM. As if that means something.

Excellently written! I always enjoy your stuff, so this one did not disappoint!

I love alpha-male Booth! Hee-hee! ;)