i beg of you, please, write the fight! i love the two and your writing is fun

that was quite funny.

Hehe! Awesome! I love Shinji!

He looked so sexy right there (actually,

he looks sexy anywhere)!

Great job!

~Drop Of Poison

Hooray for Shinji. Being primarily an anime-follower, my opinion of Shinji was just raised a few weeks ago when he showed up in the trenchcoat to fight Grimmjow. Am hoping that there is copious Shinji in the coming Arc. I liked this story; nice and short and very true to the characters of each.

I like the dialoughe, howerver, it is very hard to tell who is speaking. Perhaps you could make it easier to read by either having the speaker's name mentioned before or after the dialouge.

i haven't read much of the bleach manga...is Shinji the leader of the Vizards?

Thank you for writing about Shinji! He's so underloved! T_T Anyway, I like this-short and to the point. I love the interaction and the dialogue, it really fits the two of them.