the way you worded this and the title made it kinda like sick humor. that' always good for a chuckle.

aw love story! good job

AW! This was just too cute! Aww, Shuuhei is such a gentleman! xD xD

*loves*

Now that's an original way to show Rangiku's love for Gin.

Let it all be too late! He's already gone!

And now she's left alone and crying. But maybe not alone for very long...

Great, original work!